In many countries the costs of living are rising What are the effects of this on individuals and society Suggest solutions to this problem

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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

These days, many people are struggling to deal with rising living cost. This essay will outline some effects of this issue and put forward some feasible solutions.
Intially, higher living cost are affecting people in great ways. Many citizens cannot keep up with the living cost, which means they will have to find more jobs with the view to making ends meet. As a result, people do not have enough timeto take up exercises, do leisure activities to blow off steam in working, which will lead to detrimental effects such as anxiety disorder and depression. For example, in Japan, people are overworking and such depressed that many hung themselves. On the society, rising cost of living leaves people no other way but walking on the criminal road. They are facing poverty and the only choice is to become robbers and thieves.
Although the living cost is going up, we also have some possible measures to tackle this problem. Firsly, people have to be more considerable. They should buy goods that are reasonably priced. Besides that, putting aside some money would be a choice just in the worst case. By doing this, people will have the ability to foot their bill and cover life expenses. Secondly, governments should have stricter laws for citizens to abide, by which reducing the number of criminals. Furthermore, governments should increase the minimum wage for the unemployed, which means that they are able to cover living expenses rather than do illegal actions.
In conclusion, although it is hard for people to cope with the increasing living cost, there are a number of solutions to consider mitigating the effects and make sure to obey the law.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 663, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95698924731 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41665321082 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7517410368 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2262411421 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744693170384 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714679279263 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161825260674 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702317635546 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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