Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Fashion style is considered to be one of important aspects in many workplaces. Some of them argue that their employees should have a taste in fashion while others think that the quality of work should be appreciated rather than a good dressing sense. This essay will grant us a chance to discuss both these opinions.
On the one hand, some workplaces require their staff to wear formal clothes. In fact, many people's first judging toward somebody is based on how they are looking. Therefore, wearing a formal and polite dress code helps them draw the attention of other people. Especially, while they have client-facing professions, a smart and beautiful dress style will make the customers impress and feel more pleasure. For instance, people will respect and trust the salesman with a flashy suit and tie. His tidy and clean appearance is also seen as the proper characteristic to represent the organization. The employees have to dress properly because their appearance plays a crucial role toward public opinions.
On the other hand, a good-looking appearance does not assure the quality of work. Technology has changed the way people used to communicate in the modern workplace. For example, you can send emails, text or video chat or even video conference with subordinates or superiors through social networking apps like G-mail, Skype, etc. With the help of technology, you no longer need to be present at your workplace every time. Therefore, the efficiency of work is more evaluated than the dressing styles. Moreover, big organizations such as Facebook and Google allow their staff to dress freely as long as they complete their tasks properly.
In conclusion, it is considered by some that dressing style is an indispensable aspect of many workplaces while others value the quality of work more. I personally believe that both opinions are interconnected and complementary to each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21035598706 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83814526543 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2492702568 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306180999833 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817559109853 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753310507503 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190812798164 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630296049297 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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