some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays people have various tendencies about the place they want to live. Some people argue that horizontal cities are a superb place for residence, whereas, others maintain cities with towers and skyscrapers have more benefits. I do admit that a horizontal city can provide more advantages.
On the one hand, residents in horizontal cities benefit greatly from fresh air and nature. Firstly, never do people suffer from air pollution of exhaust fumes, because, the population in these cities several times less than in other cities. Secondly, people can foster different plants in their spacious garden. Therefore, the town becomes green and produces oxygen during the days. Last but not least, people who dwell in these areas inevitably are more determined to protect the environment and aware of the grave effect of contamination. Due to these reasons, these people breathe more fresh air.
On the other hand, vertical cities are more modern and access cutting-edge technology more than the horizontal one. With no hesitation, the construction of skyscrapers is much complicated than houses and there are lots of nuances in their process. Therefore, engineers ought to use state-of-the-art equipment to build these buildings. In addition to that, the growth of the population contributes to more business. Governments and organizations have to establish world-class facilities for people to meet their requirements. Hence, vertical cities have to follow technology to cope with their needs.
In conclusion, although people access to technology in vertical cities, these technologies bring numerous detrimental side effects to them. So, I prefer to live in a horizontal city where is full of tranquil and peaceful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49248120301 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92497873387 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2652129779 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229137333856 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751500635227 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671876775469 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155165000314 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500628395929 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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