Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
We have known that climate change is causing plenty of problems to the habitat of many people, animals and plants. This issue is too difficult to solve for governments and scientists, so some people decide to be acquainted with it. In my opinion, I don’t entirely agree with this statement.
It is reasonable why some people suggest accepting and living with climate change.It is said that climate change is caused by air a large amount of emission started from factories,wasting natural resources.To stop this situation,the government has to stop activated factories and exploit less resources.This means, a lot of factories will be closed, machines will not have enough energy to active because of banning using resources which affects well the economy of a country.Moreover,the cost to surmount climate change,only in Vietnam,is about 16 billion USD.I am sure that the government will hardly accept this requirement while the awareness of citizen is still low.
On the other hand,I believe that people are no longer familiar with climate change because it causes harms to both human and animals.Recently, some burning forests were happened in Australia. In Brazil, the Amazon had been destroyed in a wide area. The sea level are increasing from a lot of melted ices day by day.These examples are all the result of climate change and if people still ignore, it might destroy humanity. In addition, there are still some effective ways to reduce climate change,for instance,try to recycle every possible things in our houses,plant more trees, let animals have living place by building houses or help them when they get injured.Last but not least,use less plastic bags,start using long-lasting bags instead. Plastic products are the worst thing to environment and we need to reduce it.
In conclusion, I don’t accept the idea of living with climate change when we still have solutions to deal with. It can disappear if each people acknowledges well with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97826468262 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.260085888 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207737741072 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792708535902 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340626533311 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133085889699 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269651819445 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.