Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful
educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse
effect on the people who play them.
In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
There have been endless arguments over the possible impact of video games upon
players. Much as the dispute in favor of the significance of the advantages of those
games is legitimate, personally I believe they are still outweighed by the
disadvantages.
On the one hand, some certain benefits of video games are undeniable. Firstly, they
are functioning as a source of harmless entertainment. In modern time, daily
performances always go along with a huge amount of stress from studying and
working, hence the higher demand for relaxation. As a matter of fact, the world is
seeing an increasing number of not only youngsters but also adults who play video
games to alleviate the intensity of their academic studies or hard-working
occupations. Secondly, it is also proved that playing games can enhance logical
thinking and problems solving skills since players are forced to use their brain to
complete the game.
On the other hand, I would argue that those video games present more
disadvantages. Video games are highly addictive, and that players are constantly
given more stages in these games leads to their negligence on other important
activities since the temptation of clearing those stages is sometimes irresistible. If
time is spent excessively on games, players’ daily routine, studying or working for
instance, will suffer. More dangerously, many crime cases have been reported
recently with the motive of getting money to play video games. Especially young
people are more likely to get involved in robbery or even murder as their addiction to
games cannot be sufficed by their current budget.
In conclusion, although video games’ entertaining and educational benefits are
widely recognized, I still think that the drawbacks are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89013099061 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2062438911 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381320962445 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13305256775 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081432022387 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985643945401 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888911641924 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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