Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
People have different views about whether the strength of body or of mentality is more crucial to get succeed in sport. While a strong body can bring in various advantages in playing sports, I believe that any successful sport players must have a powerful spirit.
On the one hand, physical strength can boost the players’ performance when they are in the competitions. This mode of strength allows athletes not only to perform general sport skills such as running, jumping, or any other tasks but also to reduce the risk of injuries when competing. In soccer, for example, a greater muscular player can run and chase after the ball much faster than either his teammates or rivals who are weaker. Or a taller goalkeeper can easily catch the coming ball while a shorter one must jump high to do this. It can also be seen that World Cup champions have always been Western teams, not Asian ones thanks to being born with greater physical strength.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important for sport players as well as athletes to build a strong mentality. A powerful spirit is the key factor determining the success of a player or the whole team. If a player, regardless of physical power, has not got an ambition to win the game, he will not put an attempt to perform or finish his tasks, hence losing the championship to the competitors. Take a swimming competition as an example, assuming that all participants have the same physical strength, the more ambitious athletes will swim harder and faster than the ones swimming with no efforts which should not be in competitive environment.
In conclusion, I can understand why players or athletes work out or practice on a regular basis, but it seems to me that a powerful spirit is much more desirable in sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76051779935 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61575973123 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3749799872 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176511037358 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068801276055 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560963754575 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105701074429 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480559229934 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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