Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills.\
What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
You should write at least 250 words.
Undoubtedly, the employers observe that there is privation of social skills in newly recruited staff. Even though the negligence of academic world about the relevance of interpersonal skills is one the pivotal reasons, still the mainstreaming of motivational programs would firmly bring this nuisance under absolute control.
Since most of the newly hired people come directly from educational institutions through campus placements, thus they undermine the importance of pragmatic skills. Seemingly, instead of instilling social traits among pupils, the entire academic world proffer the rote learning system. Therefore being novices, they are way from the harsh reality of working
ambience and do not realize value of interpersonal competencies. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact documented by London School of Economics that dearth of interpersonal skills especially communication skills among young aspiration would jeopardize the whole communication channel of organisation.
To continue, though it is quite an arduous task to inculcate the social skills in matured person, if organisations conduct the inspirational programs then employees would be acquainted about the significance of interpersonal competencies. These programs mainly include motivational lectures about team work , cooperation, collaboration, communication style and so on. To exemplify, as per the report stated by the Human Resource Manager of Google, in the gone calendar year, the orientation session is utmost
vital while introducing the new employees into the working environment.
In conclusion , although reckless behavior of academic institution turn the work force into nerds, motivation session would help them to overcome from this hassle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07630522088 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20364310645 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.69301798 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117786180118 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434237363844 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273079432343 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586003349387 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288387211744 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.28 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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