In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
In this modernized world, the father and mother’s role in a family changes significantly compared to the past and so does the family structure. In my opinion, this change has both advantages and disadvantages.
There is a list of transformations in the family structure. In the past, all families follow the patriarchy regime, which means the father or the oldest man in every family controlled everything, while women or the mother has no position in the families. Even when having dinner, women and children could not sit in the same position with male. When a father died, the eldest son dominated in the family, not the wife. Men had authority to go to school and educated, while women must stay at home to do housework and did not have condition to study. But now everything has changed. Today, more and more kinds of family structures are made. Women have the right to head and manage everything. Both men and women have responsibility to cultivate family happiness. Not only patriarchy and matriarchy but also single dad and single mom starts appearing. A family also can be formed with only a father or only a mother. There are some homes having no parents, only have grandparents and children, which are also recognized as a family.
The variety of family structures in this innovated society makes significant benefits. Matriarchy proves the renovation of women’s role in this society, even these days a single woman can take on well whole the family. However, there is a drawback in this situation. Children might not be able to feel the love from both mother and father when a huge amount of single-parents families happened. Or, children who have widowed mother or father will lost the way of beloved from the other.
In conclusion, the gigantic number of family structures happened cause benefits and risks to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
... who have widowed mother or father will lost the way of beloved from the other. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95498392283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77649707578 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0203792908 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.05 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21095255818 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622568142846 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634054542122 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144708080439 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06820011829 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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