You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.
Write a letter to your boss. IN your letter:
Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.
Explain how you will keep up to date while you’re away.
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
My name is Rebecca Hensen, I am a research head in the department of zoology. I am writing this letter to request one and a half month leave in my favor as my sister is getting married.
The marriage is planned on the 15th of this month, It got preponed as my brother in law got a job abroad and he has to join within a month. She is my only sibling and I have to be present in family functions. The rituals start from next week, this is really important for me as well as my family.
However, I will be in touch with my colleagues through email and even on call, if they need me. Furthermore, I will keep myself available in the mornings and perform any immediate work online
.
I have already given a record of my work to my research assistant and he will be able to manage most of the work himself. I have also briefed him about the upcoming project and he can always ask for my assistance as I will be available online.
Will look forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely,
Rebecca Hensen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: brother-in-law
...th of this month, It got preponed as my brother in law got a job abroad and he has to join wit...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s and perform any immediate work online . I have already given a record of my wo...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your response. Yours Sincerely, Rebecca Hensen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32105263158 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44797853077 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3590395101 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127386651623 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552670909145 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407967764282 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749678790037 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276211199948 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.