People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society
How can we create an ideal society?
It is undeniable fact that people who live around us contributes a lot when it comes to our mentality, behavior and personality. Some people always take efforts and plan of creating an ideal society to spend their future in the place, but maximum times the idea is never achieved. In my opinion, ideal society is a place where people from different religion, caste and creed come together, stay as a family, stand for each other in difficult situations.
Furthermore, the young kids in this society give respect to elders, make sure they abide to their duties and know about their responsibility towards society and nation as a whole. The society should be well equipped with infrastructure for sports, medical, educational and devotional places. There should be rules and regulations implemented along with penalties for not following the same. Henceforth, people will avoid getting into activities that could damage the peace and harmony withing people.
At the first place, a society can have elected members for handling areas like infrastructure maintenance, event gathering, crime issues and other matters. Apart from this chair person mentioned above every single person can show active involvement and participation in any upcoming take. For example, if the society takes up and initiative of helping orphanage kids for education, a group can be formed who can devise and execute the plan and achieve the goal. Additionally, monthly meetings and annual gatherings can be taken up to bring every family together and share their views and thoughts.
To conclude on this, It is said that future is in hands of youth, so it is responsibility of every youth to come up with ideas to make their society and ideal place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13732394366 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76110901118 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9272425044 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26424317246 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860698611743 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079480559608 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153065975713 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592281240174 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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