Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt in the fact that relationships are the backbone of an individual's life.Any bond that people share including- friendship, marriage, love or simply a colleague; all remain strong only if they rest on a strong foundation.The question now arises that what lays this foundation?It is of course honesty or the truth.I am totally in accord with the notion that being truthful is of utmost significance in any relationship.
To begin wth, staying honest with your mate builds the trust in a relationship.In other words, speaking unvarnished truths always give a clear picture of circumstances that people are undergoing.Thus, chances of any misunderstanding get decreased.For instance, when i was in hostel about two years back, my anatomy assignment got burnt and i absolutely had no clue.I was suspicious that my room mate would have stolen my missing work and i thought of boycotting her.However, the next morning she came to me apologising for her mistake that she committed unintentionally.Actually, there was a power cut last night and she was studying late at night in candlelight when she accidentally slipped and the candle flames burnt my project.Nevertheless, she made my project again sitting the whole night and returned me back.This was how her honest gesture made me forgive her and saved our friendship.
Furthermore, concealing truth can prove to be detrimental.When a person tries to cloak his venalities or manipulate the truth, it leaves his partner feel cheated when he actually learns the truth.Additionally, when an individual tells a lie for the first time, he then goes on adding more lies and it becomes a habit to fabricate false stories.Consequently, a sense of mistrust leads to quarrels on a daily basis and as a result, people end their relations on a bitter note.For example- one of my close friend's father had an extarmarital affair with his secretary.He used to come late at nights and brutally hit his wife.When his wife used to ask him his whereabouts he used to abuse her and cook up stories.But one fine day, his wife caught him red-handed and her sentiments were hurt poorly.She later on left him and took his son too away from him.Now his father regrets about telling lies and chaeting his wife.
In conclusion, speaking truth is crucial at every single moment n any relationship in order to avoid disputes and emotional crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06615776081 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41794976435 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638676844784 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 98.0 20.1344086022 487% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 328.773002998 48.9658058833 671% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 497.75 100.406767564 496% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 98.25 20.6045352989 477% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 45.5 5.45110844103 835% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128738076162 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841471356777 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262722357918 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841471356777 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262722357918 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.6 11.7677419355 438% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.99 58.1214874552 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.5 10.1575268817 409% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.39 8.01818996416 155% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.2 10.0537634409 410% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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