In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people are convinced that majority of students who are living in the country having high rate of unemployment, only need to complete primary curriculum and find it unnecessary to learn secondary school. From my point of view, I completely disagree with this opinion.
The main reason is that the knowledge that is taught in primary education is not sufficient and effective for people to apply in real life. To clarify, primary school is simply basis where students learn how to spell, write well and improve their awareness about some simple subjects like Maths, Literature, and English. Take Vietnamese educational system as an example, during 5-year period, teachers try their best to accustom students to plus, abstractions, multiplications and so on. They also are taught about morality and how to behave well in society. Therefore, learning in primary school is the first step that encourage people to develop more in the future.
Another factor worth mentioning is that secondary education is the environment where students can reveal their creativity and perceive new knowledge. To put in another way, this period is opportunity for juveniles to approach new subjects, which are instrumental in their career. Although many students will not be trained in academic environment, some subjects like Maths, Physics, Chemistry give them basis knowledge. From this, young adults can find job in physicall demanding like jobs related- security, jobs related- agriculture. In conclusion,secondary environment plays a pivotal role in the pupils’ life because it helps them find a job to secure their income, as a result, the rate of unemployment would decrease.
In short, I completely disaproval of the idea that secondary school is not essential in some developing countries and citizens in these countries only need to finish their primary curriculum for above reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , secondary
...jobs related- agriculture. In conclusion,secondary environment plays a pivotal role in the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95612656802 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1210075845 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189699029655 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618649678482 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440073885878 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115590821676 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367605690351 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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