Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The world as experienced various technological improvements in the past decades. However, it is arguable that the most vital device has been the computer. I disagree with this as the world has had various devices such as phones, television, cameras, and so on that as made our lives easy.
In the past, computers were big, with external central processing unit, large screens, and couldn't be moved easily from one place to another. it could only print letters in black and white, producing one document at a time but presently, colour printers as made improvement in sizes and colour. computers has been converted to laptops, palm top, and other easily moveable devices. these improvements as made live more easy for the populace.
disagreeing with the proponent of the above, there have been the inventions of other powerful and important gadgets. Firstly, the introduction of iPhones, Android, and other smartphone devices which can do the work of computers more conveniently and comfortably anywhere you go. Secondly, online shopping which was never there in the past, as made buying things in any part of the world easy no matter your country or race. this saves time, stress, with the ability to choose from a variety of goods and services. Thirdly, courier services such as konga, Jumia, wish, DHL and so on delivers ordered goods at the recipient door steps no matter the region it was ordered from. Finally, the invention of fax and icomputers as made sending short code messages possible. this reduces the stress of typing and sending long messages to our love ones. All these are indications that other technological inventions have been introduced that has made life easy.
To sum up, it is viable that other innovations have been introduced that has made life easy for the citizenry aside computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64872925507 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7175411668 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139526512108 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436720676716 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321658891451 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712197271848 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404181884861 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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