Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will
remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
In these days, the number of people who tend to have access to online media increased tremendously; however, newspapers is thought to provide the most essential source of news. Although newspapers has held an vital position in daily lives, online news is taking over the position of printed newspapers gradually.
There are a couple of compelling justifications why newspapers will not maintain their position in the future. The first reason could be that news on the online sources approach readers easily in the light of their convenient access. Take recent Coronavirus pandemic as a prime example, information about the pandemic is updated promptly on CNN and New York Times everyday to prevent people from suffering from. The second factor could be related to a fact that daily trends are not caught to meet readers’ requirements immediately by newspapers writers in the grounds that newspapers has a prolonging procedure including editting and printing. This could probably lead to that traditional newspapers might not be able to to compete with the Internet in terms of the updating speed.
Reading news on the Internet could bring readers new experience. It is apparent that one limitation of newspapers is that it cannot convey visual messages to people who read news on a regular basis. Meanwhile, non-stop progress of the technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload videos and voice records on various online websites. For example, sports fans these days can rewatch their favorite matches anytime with only a laptop connected to the Internet, which a mere paper cannot do.
In conclusion, the idea that printed newspapers would continue to be the most crucial source of information is rather absurb as the Internet has become increasingly dominant due to the benefits it offers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e of news. Although newspapers has held an vital position in daily lives, online n...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ated promptly on CNN and New York Times everyday to prevent people from suffering from. ...
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Line 2, column 720, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...raditional newspapers might not be able to to compete with the Internet in terms of t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25172413793 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79311409108 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6818820526 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240566352894 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883635467423 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558949027445 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144056814409 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399088528691 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.