If you could study a subject that you never had an opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.
If you could study a subject you never have an opportunity , what it would be?
People cannot learn lot of things at once. We go to Universities to gain broad knowledge. I studied Occupational therapy in university and I enjoy helping patients to do Exercises. But if I had an opportunity to study some other subject then I will definitely go for Astronomy.
I feel this for couple of reasons which I will explore in my essay.
First and foremost reason is that, I am always fascinated with stars and moon from my very childhood .I always enjoyed watching stars, galaxies, always waiting to see a shooting stars.
Lying on terrace and watching moon and stars was my favorite hobby. However, Astronomy is the study of world outside the periphery of earth and the study of Universe and finding the hidden secrets of another world.
In addition, I am always interested to find about the UFO's (unidentified flying objects). Wheather, there is another world or not ? How Aliens look like ? Are they more advanced than us? What about area 51, there was a smashed UFO over there is true? We all have watched the movie "Avatar" there was an another world over there and scientist travelled through advanced technology . All these curosities motivates wanting me to study the beautiful and grandest phenomenon of Universe.
All in all ,I personally belive Astronomy is the subject of finding hidden mystries, studying planets, comets, stars and galaxies and it is my deepest desire to learn closely about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97647058824 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77854427426 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4720159698 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6470588235 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236994162695 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698064796372 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143437178699 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139674288576 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195595866376 0.0645574589148 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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