The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Overweight is becoming the serious health issue in health care system and its increasing day by day. Some people think that, involving more physical education in the school curriculums is the key point to get rid of these problems. I partially agree on this statement and this essay support my viewpoint.
Firstly, there is no any doubt, that physical exercise is the key point of weight loss. Introducing more sports and physical activities in school curriculum can be effective step to avoid these problems in next generation. These types of activities help them to change their habit and and also lower chance of developing health problem related to obesity and overweight. For example, some schools had already introduce this types of activities to their students but now they have to give more importance and increase their time and classes. Moreover, students can encourage to their parents also in physical fitness by conveying benefits of exercise. As claimed by BBC survey, those parents are more interest and aware of fitness whose children are involved in sports.
In other hand, eating healthy also as important as exercise for the fitness of children .only exercise cannot reduce the overweight, schools and parents must know that good diets also must be provided to them to keep the body and health balance. Only physical without balance diet can harm health of child, so, schools must provide awareness of healthy eating. Such as, due to busy life parents are providing packing good for their children, school must avoid such types o dunk food inside school areas and also teach profit of eating organic and healthy food.
In sort, Physical fitness is important to avoid overweight, hence, proper diet also must be provided to the children for their good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08532423208 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.456456042 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0820422402 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185588696791 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765265616866 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582621421061 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137587490448 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949171868467 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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