Some people believe that children leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
While it is argued that recreation time for childrenis one of the moment to refresh the mind after long days of school. I strongly agree that there are many advantages to involve education in any situation even in leisure activities on daily life.
On the one hand, children are in the age to active and learn the basic knowledge. It is pivotal to drive them to study in a fun way du to the fact that children have short term of attention to focus on one subject. Pastime can be usedin precise methods with mixture education and study in one activity. Taken as an example, in pre-school, children without realize it, do games while study. They play puzzle but at the same time it develops their problem solving ability. As we know too, children could absorb information easily, if parents utilize that time precisely, they will be way smarter. It is clear that take an advantage during any leisure activities with education has effect to children's way of think.
On the other hand, when children have a relax time on recreation that provides them to recover from stress activities at school. After the tiring weeks of struggle with assignment, they finally can take off some serotonin at weekend with di vacation with family. In exact case, In my country, children in Elementary school stage engulf busy week with plenty of duties so leisure activities needed to avoid them from stress. It is undoubtable that ease children's burden by force of school is important to keep their spirit on as a growth person.
From my stand point, I am in the believe of involvement of education on pastime or persuit can establish benefit for children to help them sharping intelligence in a pleasant way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e. It is pivotal to drive them to study in a fun way du to the fact that children have short...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... On the other hand, when children have a relax time on recreation that provides them t...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...person. From my stand point, I am in the believe of involvement of education on pastime ...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...on. From my stand point, I am in the believe of involvement of education on pastime ...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to sharp' or 'sharp'.
Suggestion: to sharp; sharp
...blish benefit for children to help them sharping intelligence in a pleasant way.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pleasant way" with adverb for "pleasant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dren to help them sharping intelligence in a pleasant way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.795221843 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55740053552 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8867974029 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243968144549 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826668757467 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380138709598 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136638039881 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473278497989 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.