Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substitutes. A vegetation diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
Herbal diets are believed to have sufficient vitamins and minerals for human body in dayily consumptions in compare of meat-including diets. I agree with this view and I will explain some reasons for my position in the following.
To begin with, in botanical foods and ingredients there are the same minerals and vitamins which can be founded in meat. Although plants and animals have distinguished fundamental features, their fundamental materials are the same in tiny cellulars. But the portion of various minerals are different in these both groups. For instance in meat the average amount of Protein in per kilo is approximately 20 percent, while in vegetables is less than 5 percent in per kilo. For receiving enough minerals, just a great portion of vegetables should be consumed. Accordingly via using enough herbal foods, sufficient material will be provisioned for body.
Another reason for my position is the rate of harmful components which are found in vegetarian and meat diets. Since the constructive materials of meats and plants are the same, so both of groups have harmful and beneficial materials. Nevertheless, the amount of harmful factors are considerably less in plants. For example Urea-acid which can cause fundamental Damage on kidneys and it can be existed in meat in high percent in per kilo. As a result, eating vegetarian diet even in huge amount can not pose a severe damage and is healthier than meat diet.
In conclusion, given the above consideration, not only are plants and fruits in compare of meat more reliable for daily consumption, but also herbal diets have always been recommended by dietitians. Due to the almost zero percent of harmful effect on human body.
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Suggestion: Accordingly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89156470437 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8161039874 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212208437445 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698158004433 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520930253787 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131711127948 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252570423147 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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