Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary society, it is widely believed that physical health is of great importance to get success in sport. However, others argue that mental strength is more vital. Personally, I think, to be a successful sport athlete, it is required to have both mental and physical well-being.
Regard the physical strength, it is an essential factor contributing to the success in sport. In fact, a sport athlete need to have a good heath to take part in various intense training programs which are organized for practice. This can help them improve their fitness level and promote a high level of endurance and stamina. As a result, they can have stronger physical health to facilitate their performance in competitions.
About the mental strength, it also plays a crucial part in gaining success. During the training process, sometimes an athlete may encounter a number of difficulties such as having insufficient heath level, hence, they need have a strong will to overcome the problems. Also, they need to have a lot of determination to make a whole-hearted attempt to achieve their goal. This can act as a motivation for them to keep pursuing their dream and never give up.
To sum up, although physical health is paramount significance, mental strength is also crucial in a sport athlete's success. Therefore, I strongly believe that to become successful in sport, both physical and mental well-being needed be promoted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'athletes'' or 'athlete's'?
Suggestion: athletes'; athlete's
...tal strength is also crucial in a sport athletes success. Therefore, I strongly believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10683760684 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91727632087 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3678311077 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25127429331 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101474625786 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794034644421 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177049946102 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105727337887 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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