Some people believe than nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, there have been opposed opinions about the variation of human’s selections. One of them is for some individuals who argue that people throughout the world have had extremely wide variation of alternatives in every subject. Due to several reasons, which will be clarified later, I myself totally concur with that opinion.
To commence with, there have been some causes why humans have had lots of elections in their lives. The main one is communicating with other people across the world which has increased particularly by international transportation. In the old days, individuals used to limit their lives based on their society, therefore, their activities were restricted by circumstance of their location. On the other hand, since people interacted with each other more than before, they have encountered themselves with strange events which were not common in their own countries. To be specific, in current decades, it has been more prevalent for residents to have many job applicants across the world which means their options for careers have expanded.
In addition, technology has propelled individuals to enhance their selections. This is because by technology not only have they obtained variety of knowledge, but also it has given them opportunities to see more possibilities. For example, one person from undeveloped country such as Yemen could have access to social media which would increase his or her information about diverse aspects of life. As a result, wide range of choices would be interested by them that could be continued as professional way of living for them in order to alter their life condition. In sport terms, people have seen different fields from other cultures that may be pursued by them.
In conclusion, for various considerable points of modern world like satisfying transportation or technology, especially internet, people’s choices have made to be a lot. Consequently, some individuals including myself agree with the mentioned view of increased number of elections for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38629283489 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96715194159 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0229549792 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137109320047 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509639860135 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359010623166 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911779707304 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225692522329 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.