Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
In the modern world, most people compete to maintain their modern lifestyle and to secure a decent job. Parents also want to teach their children to compete to become a successful person in the future but some people believe that cooperation is better than competition to become better person. In Nepal, parents educate their children to become more competitive than cooperation to have better life in the future. I am going to discuss both views along with my opinion.
To begin with, competition plays an immense role in establishing a positive personality and behaviour. It motivates a child to upgrade their knowledge. Furthermore, increase competition led to children creative and open minded and open doors for future opportunities. For instance if we teach children to compete with others from young age, they will become more creative and hardworking to achieve their goal, in addition to it, competition motivate children and encourage them to do better by rewarding the one who stands at a top to illustrate children will perform better in their class and are reward by teacher. Even though, they become more independent and rely on themselves, the younger generation will be selfish, careless and reluctant to others especially in studies. Sometimes, they may use alternative means to gain victory.
In the other hand, cooperation is a key component for better personality as well as to prevent from individuality. It is believed that children who learn to cooperate with others will attain success and contribute to the society. Furthermore, collaboration will encouraged them to have a good team work between colleagues and they will learn to respect other's opinion. They will be able to adjust with other hence it will trained them to become more sensitive individual in future. Moreover, cooperation develops interpersonal skills which play an indispensable role in their professional life
To conclude, positive competition maintains excitement and zeal in learning. It helps them to contend in this materialistic world. Nevertheless, it is better to educate children concentrating on cooperation rather than competition as nobody is perfect and people need to work and learn together to achieve certain goal.
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- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33806818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02076015752 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9052684462 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297155290409 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888871918791 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078135874098 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184285647259 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471137565307 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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