Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The world has been suffering from the environment problems.which has plays significant role in global problems. Although some individuals believe that this colossal problem can be resolved at international level, yet i am firmly disagree with this given statment.
Undoubtedly, environment problems can be solved by individuals person as if mankind assist to the government also they must use reuse or recycle products, planting new trees near their home and deter the deteriorating weather, if man kind curb using environment sources so it is possible.
Additionally, government ca tackle this arduous problems, if they start afforestation and enhance legislation about discharging industrial waste. For instance, Paris government changed norms of industries therefore that is where polution is deteriorating. Governments should also increas penalty for contamination.
On the other hand, international cooperation can also help to the conservation of environment, however individual countries step is better rather than international, as it is effective and flowless. Sending messages to door to door it may be done by individuals countries.
Summing up, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally commented that individual person or countries can protect perfectly rather than international level.
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Suggestion: , yet
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... at international level,yet i am firmly disagree with this given statment. Undoubtedly,...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Planting
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Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tackles'.
Suggestion: tackles
... possible. Additionally, government ca tackle this arduous problems, if they start af...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to door'.
Suggestion: to door
...ffective and flowless. Sending messages to door to door it may be done by individuals countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94680851064 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4288176392 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712765957447 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7285791339 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18773208243 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668190189016 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498552386013 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994872812186 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376286168469 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.