You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country. Write a letter to the secretary of the college. In your letter
• Accept the invitation and offer a possible date for the talk
• Summarise what information you will include in the talk
• Say what equipment you will need the college to arrange for you to give the talk
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is in regards to the opportunity for which I have been invited at the local community college in America. I am thankful that you have consider me to talk about my Nation in your esteemed institute.
I am running short of words to express my gratitude for this golden chance and sincerely accept the offer. I have already booked my all the appointments in the month of Nov 2020; however I have first 2 weeks free to accommodate this talk. It would be great if we can have this setup between Dec 1 to 15th else, we might have to postpone this for the March last week.
In this talk event, I am planning to talk how Indian Government has improved education system in last 5 years. I am also thinking to show a short film based on different Indian culture. This film will cover five Indian states and will talk about their famous cuisine and traditions.
I would really appreciate if you can ask your administrative department to arrange a laptop, small table and. Apart from this, I would also need overhead speakers to flow my voice gracefully.
I am looking forward to see you.
Yours Sincerely,
Rohith Sharrma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/Madam, This is in regards to the opportunity for which I have been i...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...in America. I am thankful that you have consider me to talk about my Nation in your este...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... chance and sincerely accept the offer. I have already booked my all the appointm...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ce gracefully. I am looking forward to see you. Yours Sincerely, Rohith Sharrm...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Yours Sincerely, Rohith Sharrma
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, really, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68472906404 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57527598475 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3646755309 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242057552625 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879588786218 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740894850224 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139009841483 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126201170431 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.