More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other
items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, an increasing number of people want to buy well-known designer labels of many consumer products. While there are some obvious reasons for this trend, I believe that it is a totally negative development.
The reason for the growing purchaser concern with brand stuff is simple to explain. Firstly, the marketing campaigns of large corporations aspire to identify their products with a glamorous and successful lifestyle, and people are easily swayed by advertisements. Companies often invite the celebrity endorsement to encourage customers to trust and buy their goods, with famous stars such as C. Ronaldo, Taylor Swift... Secondly, a large part of buyers desire to demonstrate their wealth and vogue, by using the latest high end items. As a result, the thought behind owning a brand name is to make others jealous.
Nevertheless, this tendency could have negative consequences both on family life and on society. In view if the purchasing of people who have an overhead income is encouraged by consuming companies to squander their savings on designer labels. Consequently, modern citizens are often more attentive to their appearance than one's inner value. From the perspective of society in general, the bad habits of younger is a disturbingly problem. Realistically, most young people's spending money come from their parents, so keep up with the expensive brand are sheer waste of time and money.
In conclusion, there are some obvious reasons why more and more citizens spend huge money in brand stuff. However, it could be negative influences on families and the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('disturbingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('problem') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29019607843 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85390523432 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2151482556 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195006751454 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055933241111 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496311341841 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123265090212 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446195239167 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.