More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars, and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that an increasing number of people desire luxury products rather than off-brands. There are a lot of reasons for this phenomenon which I believe that has detrimental effects on human life.
The explanations of purchasing high-priced products can be justified by the consumer’s usage experiences and their need for social acceptances. Firstly, brand name products tend to be meticulously crafted and elaborate in production. This can provide a quality experience for buyers, especially for those with strict requirements. Moreover, owning such high-end goods, buyers can support their personal or professional image. This can help them be perceived as fashionable, trendy or high class and fit in a particular subculture or peer group.
Alongside such reasons, I believe that this trend brings more harm than good. Acquiring well-known brand products often comes with a hefty price tag. People who prioritize these products may overspend or go into debt to keep up with the trend, leading to financial strain. Furthermore, many high-end brands engage in excessive production, leading to overconsumption of resources and contributing to environmental degradation. Mass production can result in pollution, waste, and depletion of natural resources.
To sum up, the quality of product experience and social acceptance are the major reasons for acquiring luxury products, which is negative development as its hefty price and environmental degradation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68181818182 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19191903209 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668181818182 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6828402569 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745378515032 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026581200512 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255103867726 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516805764786 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258879667279 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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