Some decisions are tough to make and once such case is moving-out from our hometowns. As difficult as it seems, mixed emotions and family bondings, is what makes it evenmore harder. However, I pivote migration to different cities for better prospects rather than to stagnate in a small place. Without any prejudices, I try to enunciate various advantages of immigration in this essay, as a support of my opinion.
There are many benefits for younger generation by relocating to another place. Firstly, jobs and quality life is primafacie reason for youth to venture this step. Afterall, we cannot expect flooding opportunities in our career unless we make a move towards better tomorrow. In most of the cases, earning and financial stability is impossible for growing family needs.Secondly, education and career planning is another concern for youth, as most of the times countryside lack in schools and colleges. Finally, learning new skills is another aspect many of us point to this exodus. Apart, many other issues like health, need of change in surroundings prompts us to take this new journey.
Nevertheless, some argue that it's best to stay-in the native towns as moving out means weekened family bonds and losing ancestral business. Whereas, current technology and transportation makes this statement obsolete as world is now becoming global village. Surely, it's painful to be away from one's parents, but always to be remembered that it's just temporary. Few suggests that, home sick makes some people to be devoid of their surroundings but nonetheless not a good factor in comparision to the bright future. In my own personal experience, as an example, my initial struggle to adjust to surroundings after moving to Hyderabad from my town, proved to be worth all of it when I got promoted to better position. Furthermore, we can spend two or three weeks for festivals once in a while, whenever we get a break from regular work.
Therefore, we can safely conclude the topic by agreeing the fact that migrating to metropolis is indeed a good idea. We all have to make this choice some or other day, but should do it before it's too late. Ofcourse, we can always bounce-back to our villages and plan for retirement, if we wish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04825737265 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82355655001 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621983914209 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.413048914 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106762784085 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031339241898 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281575903986 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611635203251 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241851155226 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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