Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Importance of subjects like history is never to be underestimated as we can walk into future only with light shed by our past. Ever changing world needs trending topics, but basics of human understanding can only read by history. Planning future is possible with only better knowing of history. In my opinion history is a fascinating subject and should be taught in school at par with other subjects. Let's look into why my opinion is better than it's counter argument.
science and technology is relatively well focused and recommended in academic career by parents and teachers. The reason is obvious that in competitive world job opportunities are directly related to these subjects. Growth in information technology attracts well paid salaries and cool lifestyle. However, without knowledge of history one can never learn mistakes of past and further cannot stop repeating it. Comprehensive knowledge in all subjects is essential for mental development of children. studies oriented only for purpose of earning cannot inculcate passionate learning.Literacy and education are two different perspectives of learning and nourishing children. Literacy might only fetch degrees, but with only education we become better persons and including subjects in like history in curriculam marks difference between two.
On other hand history creates curiousity in students which is crucial for learning science and technology. Moreover, monatonous subjects creates lack of interest in studying. Stories of kings,dynasties, historical documents,places helps a student for diversifying thoughts. Infact, studying history does not necessarily means remembering dates,events, era's but more of relating ourselves to traditions, culture and origin of human civilisations. Many great civilisations like Indus, Egypt, Mesopatamia shows roots of human development from ape to modern civic citizen. Historians, relate understanding of human psychological development is easy with studying social history of a society he belongs to.
Nevertheless,one should not forget use of science and technology is also helpful for revealing unknown or missed chains in history. For Instance, carbon dating technology is very helpful to know antiquity of artefacts and thus how ancient civilisation is. Therefore, history, science,maths and other subjects are actually intertwined for smooth journey of human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85142857143 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22391699898 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631428571429 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5966369886 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5238095238 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185617866261 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512858734085 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367685992244 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106657671946 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368136643975 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.