newspaper
In today's world of globalization, news of anything happening in the world can be spread in a fraction of time. This news can be delivered by various methods: by television, radio, the internet or by the newspapers. In this vast variety of mediums, newspapers are widely used especially in developing countries like India. There are many people who believe everything written in the newspaper is true; but in my view, we should not believe everything we read in the newspaper. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following text.
First of all, publishers, working in the newspaper company sabotage the information in order to make it more interesting. Because exciting or interesting stories attract the people to read and purchase the newspaper they add details which are often not true. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Last year, I and my classmates did a nonviolent protest against the violence that doctors are facing from a patient's family members. One newspaper company did an interview with a student. An after a day, the published an article about this. However, it stated that one of our students passed out in the rally and she had been admitted to the hospital. This was not true at all. The publisher added this false information just to make this article interesting.
Moreover, even if they write a completely honest article from a source, there is a possibility that the source could be inaccurate. For instance, a few weeks ago, I read an article about, lung cancer that can be cured by the Surat naturopathy center. The article stated that doctors of this center claimed that they can treat lung cancer a hundred percent. But, my aunt, who is suffering from this disease told me that this was not true. She said that she had that treatment but it was not effective. So, even if the newspaper had written what that doctors have said, the doctors were lying. As a result, they have published the wrong information in the newspaper.
In conclusion, people should not blindly trust each and everything they read in the newspaper. Because sometimes they add false details to make it amusing to read and even if they didn’t do that sources they get their information from couldn’t be always reliable
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- newspaper 70
- Some people like to spend their leisure time doing activites with a lot of people Others prefer to spend their leisure in quite ways by themselves or with one other person Which do you prefer 50
- promotion should begiven based on seniority or performance 66
- schools should ask their students to evaluate their teachers 73
- newspaper 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...violence that doctors are facing from a patients family members. One newspaper company d...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87596899225 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73238189791 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516795865633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5213558187 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0434782609 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161213925755 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525913621575 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900958849238 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991517259894 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719076560043 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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