Some people say that we do not need a printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a common belief that conventional newspaper is not necessary in the modern world. However, I partly agree with that.
On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons why e-paper is being increasingly popular in recent decades. To begin with, Thanks to the advancement of technology, we can access news more quickly just at a click of the mouse. This means, instead of going outside in order to buy printed materials, we can update immediately news at home with a smartphone that has Internet available. Moreover, most of the Internet-based newspaper is free which leads to people to ignore traditional newspaper.
Despite the benefits of printed papers mentioned above, I would contend that paper publication, in fact, can have a more important role in people‘s lifestyles and society's economy. On top of that, Despite the convenience of digital newspapers, there are vast amounts of people be still fancy printed versions. It is an indisputable fact that most elderly people are not used to reading news in front of the screen because of weak eyesight; thus, this makes paper news is more adopted. Furthermore, the disappearance of printed materials can prone to some industries. Paper’s factory, as an example, when the need for paper is diminishing, many factories can be closed, which results in an increase in unemployment.
In conclusion, while the potential advantages of digital versions make it seem like a good idea, I hold a strong belief that printed newspapers is also an important part of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09960159363 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96449683024 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4692579749 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162372818022 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610190920109 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318068014695 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945465762068 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267859413802 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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