You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Kyna,
It's been a long since we wrote to each other, I hope you are in the pink of your health; I am also doing well. I am writing to express my excitement to move into a new house, as you know I and my family always wanted to leave that crowded city and finally the moment is here. Also, I would like to invite you to my new home.
Toronto Downtown, Canada, the place where we used to live, was over congested, full of skyscrapers; therefore, we used to feel suffocated, which made us look for another place. One thing led to another, I commenced my job hunt in Calgary, Canada, eventually, this search lent me a great opportunity; hence, we got to move here.
Calgary is not only airy and spacious but also more secure than Toronto. Also, the house is big and has four rooms with an open concept kitchen with a backyard which makes it all the more beautiful. I would recommend you to visit here for your holidays, we will have great fun together.
Let me know about your plans when should I expect you, Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm regards,
Yachika Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43781094527 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31405865392 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696517412935 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7783069382 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194185055977 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714577938737 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597231420493 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113063967461 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545119892031 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.