TPO 27
In this set of materials, the reading passage and the lecturer discuss the possible reasons for the little ice age. Although the reading provides three theories about the possible reasons for little ice age, the speaker refutes this idea through several reasons which I will describe in this reporter.
First, the reading argues that because of the warming weather, glaciers were melted, and the fresh cold water sent into the Gulf Stream. And, it would a reason for cooling weather. However, the lecturer believes that the Gulf Stream only effected on the Europen and North America, but we know that the southern hemisphere such as Newzeland had a little ice age. So, the fresh cold weather cannot the main reason for occurring little ice age.
Second, the reading says that the eruption of the volcanos was the main reason for little ice age. After volcano eruption, the dark clouds of dust and sulfur gas send into the atmosphere. It caused that the sunlight could not reach the earth and became it cooler But, the professor argues that the amount of dust was not enough to block the sunlight. Because we don't have a reporter about the effects of dust such as the colorful sunlight or dark snow and rain. So it is not the reason for cooling climate.
Finally, although the passage says that increase in trees grow due to decreases in the human population may have caused a reduction of carbon dioxide and the greenhouse effect and made the earth cooler, the speaker disagrees by mentioning that human population grew rapidly after a short time, and people cut trees out for making lands appropriate for agriculture very soon. Thus there was not enough time for the forests to have any effect on the climate and cause the little ice age.
- If there is a way to improve yourself which one among the three choices you would take 1 Take more exercise 2 Eat healthy food 3 Reduce the amount of stress 81
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 27 73
- TPO 43 70
- Imagine that you are planning to take a vacation and are trying to decide between two places to visit. Which of these two options do you believe would give you better information about making your choice? Why? ۱٫ Reading about the places online۲٫ Disc 66
- It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 71
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No. of Words: 302 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 302 250
No. of Characters: 1408 1200
No. of Different Words: 154 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.662 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.192 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.992 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4