Maintaining a friendships with friends is a crucial concern of individuals, however, which is important for our happines, whether keeping this friendship with a restricted number of friends or make a new friends. Some believe a samll number of friend is easy than making new friendships, other think contraversily, they prefer to make new friends. In my opinion, I prefer to keep maintian a small group of frient to pursut of happiness. In the following paragraph I will illustrate a coupl reason to explain my point of view and support them with examples.
To begin with, keeping a few friends is more convinient to me, this is especially due to the fact that by doing so make me comfortable, limited amount of persons mean, understand each other easly, since we meet in a same thinking because we select these member of person may be aacording to our hobby or thinking, therefore we will understand each other, I have had two friends snice middlle, we share every things, support and help each other, before three years ago, I need some finance to open my private dental clinic, they support me , further more gave me a mount of money to start my work, in addition, i can not borrow form any one only them, for this resons i prefer a definit numer of friend.
Furthermore, making new friends is very difficult, especialy these day, because every one is busy with his work, family and does not have time for a further friend, also making friend need a hard effort to recognize person and understand how he thinks, in addition, if his thinking meet ours or has adifferent concepts, moreover, a lot of oersons mean many thinking and many ideas, I remember when I was in the dental collage our class decided to go to trip, we were fifteen students, and every one give his suggestion, as a sequense, we can not take afinal dicission, in the other hand, last week, my two favorate friend and me spend amazing weekend in the Newyork, this is due to the same thinking that is alwayes have.
To sum up, it is easy to have happieness with your favorat small number of friends instead of making a new friendship, according to the reasons that I mentioned in previous paragraphs.
Maintaining a friendships with friends is a crucial concern of individuals, however, which is important for our happines, whether keeping this friendship with a restricted number of friends or make a new friends. Some believe a samll number of friend is easy than making new friendships, other think contraversily, they prefer to make new friends. In my opinion, I prefer to keep maintian a small group of frient to pursut of happiness. In the following paragraph I will illustrate a coupl reason to explain my point of view and support them with examples.
To begin with, keeping a few friends is more convinient to me, this is especially due to the fact that by doing so make me comfortable, limited amount of persons mean, understand each other easly, since we meet in a same thinking because we select these member of person may be aacording to our hobby or thinking, therefore we will understand each other, I have had two friends snice middlle, we share every things, support and help each other, before three years ago, I need some finance to open my private dental clinic, they support me , further more gave me a mount of money to start my work, in addition, i can not borrow form any one only them, for this resons i prefer a definit numer of friend.
Furthermore, making new friends is very difficult, especialy these day, because every one is busy with his work, family and does not have time for a further friend, also making friend need a hard effort to recognize person and understand how he thinks, in addition, if his thinking meet ours or has adifferent concepts, moreover, a lot of oersons mean many thinking and many ideas, I remember when I was in the dental collage our class decided to go to trip, we were fifteen students, and every one give his suggestion, as a sequense, we can not take afinal dicission, in the other hand, last week, my two favorate friend and me spend amazing weekend in the Newyork, this is due to the same thinking that is alwayes have.
To sum up, it is easy to have happieness with your favorat small number of friends instead of making a new friendship, according to the reasons that I mentioned in previous paragraphs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67101827676 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6517105308 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556135770235 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.1344086022 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.004429641 48.9658058833 527% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.571428571 100.406767564 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.7142857143 20.6045352989 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2857142857 5.45110844103 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438843921098 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.245386524211 0.076458572812 321% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217973602516 0.0737576698707 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298236278983 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162188839083 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 11.7677419355 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.0537634409 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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