You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.
In your letter, you should tell:
what you have done for the company in the year you worked there
what changes you would like to recommend
what training you require
Dear Mr Williams,
I am writing to remind you about the meeting tomorrow. Although we have discussed briefly about the topics to be discussed, I think have a document would be really helpful in the future, for reference purpose.
During the year in which I have worked for the company, I have implemented several measures to ensure that tasks are delivered on time. I have introduced a task management system to the team where they will provide details of the work they do everyday. This will not only help the team members to adhere to their given list of tasks but also allow the stakeholders to get a brief overview on the progress of the project.
However, I believe there are still some inconsistencies with the flow of work. I would like to recommend having a weekly meeting with the stakeholder so that any recommendations or change requests can be incorporated in a timely manner rather than rushing in at the last minute, which might compromise with the quality of the product.
I would also like to request you to grant me the permission of attending a certification course, which can greatly contribute to the performance and productivity of the team.
I look forward to discussing further details regarding the matter in the meeting tomorrow.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ill provide details of the work they do everyday. This will not only help the team membe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... or change requests can be incorporated in a timely manner rather than rushing in at the last minu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ormance and productivity of the team. I look forward to discussing further deta...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, still, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89449541284 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88679386575 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4692724465 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237712225564 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837234598685 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499820677423 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112218484384 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474458331322 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.