In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays number of people who is eatingfast foodis increasing daily. It brings such disease like getting overweight, heart attack and other problems related to health. Governments should set a bigger tax on this type of food and it decreases the amount of people whose health is getting bad
Firstly, this method helps people to be fit and necesserity of unhealthy food automatically falls down. Also, peoples save their money by not eating fast food and they have an opportunity to buy healthy fresh eatings. First, it reduces weight and secound the peoples who eat green foods they will be healthy and will live with enjoying of their lives.
But coin has two sites, at present the cheapest eating is fast food that is why most people buy this kind of food and necessity higher than healthy foods and the people who buy this food are mostly poors. So this way will take their contingency to eat cheap food and maybe they will get hungry. Even, it leads to dieing people.
To conclude, i say it has benefits and disadvantages but the benefits overweigh the disadvantages that is the reason why i agree. We need to think about ourselves our health is first that we should think about. And governments should set a higher level of tax in this food production
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...he disadvantages that is the reason why i agree. We need to think about ourselves...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75909090909 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45115506589 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.042634302 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304606310832 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107212612791 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829446830634 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178154197463 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490348311071 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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