Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people are of the opinion that despite having greater responsibilities, adulthood is more enjoyable compared to teenage. However, I believe that being a teenager can be the most cheerful part of anybody's life
Adolescents are carefree, and free from the burden of the social and financial obligations towards their family. As a result of this, rarely are they stressed out, and live their lives without worrying about almost anything. The only thing they are expected to fulfil is to study and educate themselves. another reason for teenage being the most lovable period is that you are allowed to make mistakes. You are not judged for commiting failures. Lastly there is minimal social pressure to behave or act in a particular socially acceptable manner. That is because people often overlook at your behaviour considering you to be immature.
On the contrary, adulthood offers more freedom as to taking more decisions and choose the best for yourself. You do not need to seek permission of your parents and are more independent. You can opt for anything that you believe to be suitable to you. Inspite of having plethora of advantages, having immense responsibities makes adulthood dull and stressful. The constant pressure of succeeding and achieving career and family goals makes it unpleasant. Succumbing to these expectations, people often suffer from chronic illness such as diabetes, dipression and so on.
In conclusion, although adult life seems appealing in various ways, it is always accompanied with lots of duties and responsibilities. On the other hand, teenage has extremely few negatives which makes it more entertaining.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are rarely
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, look, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31297709924 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94821573025 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3151182972 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155110957772 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459210682665 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434451059329 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103745504905 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434024614984 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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