People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other
vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is unequivocal that environment pollution causes detrimental effects on human lives such as respiratory problems or annual natural disasters. While people believe that the price of petrol should be raised to solve environmental issues, I argue that there are other effective measures.
On the one hand, raising the cost of fuels is an effective fashion for environment pollution. The reason is that petrol in cars and other vehicles is the main source of emissions, which creates a shroud of dust in cities. Therefore, rising the cost of fuels is likely to hamper people buying them unconsciously. The ripple effect is a considerable improvement in air quality.
On the other hand, I believe that other measures are also useful. Firstly, the government can have plans to improve public transports. They can invest money in expanding public transport systems and upgrading the service quality. For example, London, where is renowned for high-quality underground, suffers much less pollution compared to other European countries. Secondly, the government can launch campaigns to raise awareness of the environment for citizens. Officials should ensure that all residents have a good grasp of the effects of environmental issues. As a result, they will know what they can do to eliminate environmental contamination. This is evident in Singapore, which is regarded as one of the purest countries in the world. Most residents there are furnished useful information by propaganda videos or infographics, so they are more responsible for protecting the environment.
In conclusion, although a rapid increase in the price of fuels is an useful way to solve environmental issues, there are other suggestions that are more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rapid increase in the price of fuels is an useful way to solve environmental issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10684230945 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2334331086 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294924946087 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795351488284 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573382862448 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169646604653 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199300161412 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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