Friendship is a crucial thing in our life, and having a good friend is very helpful with our hard live which is weighed with many duties, the question is whether keeping old friend better than doing new friends, this can be weighed in a many aspects, in my perspective, I concur with the statement that keeping old friend is quit convenience, in the following paragraph I will elaborates on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and paramount thing, keeping old friend is beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, old friends spend a long time with their friendship, therefor they know each other very well, since we can trust our old friend more than new, sometimes person cannot talk everything with his family, he need a friend to talk with, from my experience, I had friend from high school, we share everything together happiness and sadness, I can take her adivce in any problem I face that I cannot do with new friend, our friendship continue to this moment and become family friendship, we share a beautiful memories and a lot of pictures, as you see the importance of keeping old friend.
In addition, I cannot ask someone who recently know him for help in any situation I face, as apposite, I can ask my old friend who mentioned above for any type of assist, for instance, now a day and due to the issue of covid 19 I lost my job, the only person how support me is my best friend, he gave me emotional and financial support until we return back to our job, this example clearly illustrates the fact that keeping old friend has more advantages than making new friends.
To sum up, the statement that old friends are essential part in our life is as persuasive as it stands, based on exposition that I mentioned above. How we can trust them than new friend, in addition they are always ready for help like as one member of our family.
Friendship is a crucial thing in our life, and having a good friend is very helpful with our hard live which is weighed with many duties, the question is whether keeping old friend better than doing new friends, this can be weighed in a many aspects, in my perspective, I concur with the statement that keeping old friend is quit convenience, in the following paragraph I will elaborates on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and paramount thing, keeping old friend is beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, old friends spend a long time with their friendship, therefor they know each other very well, since we can trust our old friend more than new, sometimes person cannot talk everything with his family, he need a friend to talk with, from my experience, I had friend from high school, we share everything together happiness and sadness, I can take her adivce in any problem I face that I cannot do with new friend, our friendship continue to this moment and become family friendship, we share a beautiful memories and a lot of pictures, as you see the importance of keeping old friend.
In addition, I cannot ask someone who recently know him for help in any situation I face, as apposite, I can ask my old friend who mentioned above for any type of assist, for instance, now a day and due to the issue of covid 19 I lost my job, the only person how support me is my best friend, he gave me emotional and financial support until we return back to our job, this example clearly illustrates the fact that keeping old friend has more advantages than making new friends.
To sum up, the statement that old friends are essential part in our life is as persuasive as it stands, based on exposition that I mentioned above. How we can trust them than new friend, in addition they are always ready for help like as one member of our family.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-02-10 | talelaldabous | 70 | view |
- The readind and lecture about the usind of ethanol fuel as alternative to gasoline in united state The writer claims that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article He mentions ethanol is concidered as 76
- The passage and lecture discuss burning coal by product which is called coal ash that has many harmful chemical material and how the government propose to create a new strict regulation for handling and storing The author claims that new regulations are u 76
- The reading passage and the lecture are talking about people who buy franchise from other companies to begin there own business The author claims several advantages from buying franchise However the professor casts doubt on claim made in article She has d 70
- The passage and lecture are about educalion by online school the writer states that this trend in education is crack up to be He elaborates on acouple reason The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in articale She mentions the reason which are given by aut 83
- The passage and lecture both discuss genetically modified trees The author claims tree benefits from tree that modified genetically The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article She states it is not obvious there is any benefits from this method o 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elaborate'
Suggestion: elaborate
...ence, in the following paragraph I will elaborates on a couple reasons to explain my point...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e reasons to explain my point of view. First, and paramount thing, keeping old ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the importance of keeping old friend. In addition, I cannot ask someone who re...
^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...motional and financial support until we return back to our job, this example clearly illust...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re advantages than making new friends. To sum up, the statement that old friend...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5191740413 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50824208489 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.1344086022 333% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.400656044 48.9658058833 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.4 100.406767564 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.8 20.6045352989 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.59128930113 0.236089414692 250% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.324491172987 0.076458572812 424% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222063389241 0.0737576698707 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381156647596 0.150856017488 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218016030891 0.0645574589148 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 11.7677419355 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 58.1214874552 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.12 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.0537634409 286% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.