To reduce congestion,people should to be provided with free bicycles.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people beleive that people should be provided with free bicycle for reducing congestion.There is no denying that road is very jam.While I accept that providing people with bicycles will help to reduce traffic congession.The following essay tanes a look at both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, I agree in this tendency there are several reosons for this.The first one, is that it helps to dicreose traffic jams.The second one,is that decreasing accident in traffic road.In addition to majority of people agree this tendency because they love to have a free a bicycle .The third one ,is that outdoors will be quickly And addition to create a road for people ride a bicycle.The most important way to go safety and comfortable in outdoors.The other important side is that if use a bicycle it is really usefol for their health.
One the other hand,there are several harmful sides of this tendency .If people will ride a bicycle to the large road,they can be an accident.People on the road can be uncomfortable if people ride bicycles.There is a lot of damage in cars which means that bicycles pass by them.
There are also ways to prevent congestion. To avoid congestion ,it is necessary to reduce traffic and create a separate road for cyclists,increase the number of sidewalks.
In conclusion,I believe that reducing congestion,if people take a free bicycle.To sum up dicreasing congestion help to people what their safety
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, second, so, third, while, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01673640167 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01317404091 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55230125523 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.49273488 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.833333333 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8333333333 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292790472883 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144960630502 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107741107367 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172071830324 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962963309425 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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