Environmental issues are the greatest threat mankind is facing in the modern world. While, many people address this concern, the vastness of the issue makes people argue on what the major effects are. Some of them strongly feel that the extinction of large amount species of plants and animals is the most adverse effect to which many disagree.
Firstly, people supporting this argument prominently state that all the species together form the earth’s Eco system and their extinction would indirectly effect the survival of the planet itself. For example, the Great Coral reef in the bays of Australia which was one of the largest in the world has been officially declared dead in 2018. These reefs were the home for countless species of marine life. Such cases alter the natural patterns of the marine life which would force them to behave unnaturally which would start a “Domino’s” effect which could disturb the Eco systems at a much larger scale. Moreover, this argument is also done in view of the moral aspect of the right for all living beings to live and sustain on Earth.
On the other hand, some people oppose such thoughts arguing that it is more important for the human race to concentrate on the problems like Air pollution, contaminated water etc. They think that some rare species living in forests or oceans are of lesser concern. They argue that millions of people are dying due to the air pollution created by various sources like factories, vehicles etc. and it is most important to address these issues rather than focusing on some species of fish dying at the bottom of the ocean.
Overall, though issues like pollution should be addressed which are harming the human life directly, it is very important for us to recognize the extinction of animal and plant species and should take steps in saving them. It is the Eco system created by millions of plants and animals including humans which support the life on Earth. Any of these collapsing will eventually lead to the extinction of the entire living beings itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...m and their extinction would indirectly effect the survival of the planet itself. For ...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Coral) must be used with a third-person verb: 'reefs'.
Suggestion: reefs
...et itself. For example, the Great Coral reef in the bays of Australia which was one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90489913545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41788289196 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7751024029 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15695781175 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549176912496 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398577552028 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984600232253 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431270996507 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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