SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD FOLLOW THE TRADITIONS OF THE SOCIETY, WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD BE FREE TO BEHAVE AS INDIVIDUALS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
In the last decade, the life of youth has been changed due to impact of the globalization. In that case, some laymen pursue a thought that youth should stick to their old traditions, while others have a notion in a reverse manner and argue that they should be free to live their life as their own way. Both the views are elucidated in the upcoming text followed by my opinion.
The foremost reason to give liberty to the youngster is to compete in the globe. Currently, there is steep competition in the market in each and every field. If youth have to survive, they must prove themselves with their skills and behaviour. Whenever you stick with your prejudiced and prevalent believe, you will not be able to defeat, develop and sustain in this cosmopolitan. Another factor is to development of both, the nation as well as own. When you adhere to any orthodox method of communication, we can not conquer the world, which is becoming a global village. To illustrate, before the 21st century, public never utilize phone and internet, but today online lectures are taken. So, students have to know the operation methods of different gizmos.
However, there are several reasons to follow our native culture and the major one is to keep their importance in our children. If we blindly go through occidental culture in this race to clinch the paramount position, the significance of our culture may be devastated. Additionally, we have already desolated from our family and tradition because of western influence. In simple words, Indian people now wear jeans, t-shirts and women also work as parallel as men; and they do not respect their own golden ager people and live in a nuclear family, which are far enough to explain the manipulation of western people.
Agglomerating above all the points, it can be concluded that, although there are reasons like influence and diminish the importance of their native cultures and social manners by giving freedom to youth, as per my notion, to compete in this fast pace world, we have to acclimatize and remould ourself according to the era, else we will not survive to save our traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8870523416 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64796907882 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597796143251 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7069078528 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136300097874 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347973565983 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453941162263 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754983724359 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519576390459 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.