Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Several people think that to become successful athlete, someone should have body strenght, but there are people argue that more mental endurance is needed. in this essay I will discuss both views and I will give my argue.
In the one hand, to be a successful in the sport field, one of that most important is have phisical strenght. A lot of kinds sport prioritize the body, so that a athlete should train every day to get it. In addition, few people achievement are they who often was train. For Instance, the world football player, boxer, volleyball player, weight filters, and others. They are who get achievement bacause they have strong body. If the don not have it, several eole belive that they will never be successful.
In the other hand, some people believe that physical strength is not the only one requirment to be success but there is more important than it, that is mental strenght. This matter most needed because, firstly, mental endurance can help to keep fight in cometition, secondly, always have spirit to be better, and not easyly discouraged.
In my opinion, I agree that phisical endurance is more inmortant than phisical strenght.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91370558376 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49744129412 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1496387579 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27068233993 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893676712226 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102455010133 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155893323504 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905568110185 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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