Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such a situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People’s views are divided while handling downfall in their lives, such as unsatisfactory workplace or running out of money. Some people thought it would be better to accept those situations, while others want to overcome this by self-efforts. I'm personally inclined towards the second view and will justify that in subsequent paragraphs.
Those advocating the former view of an argument are strong believers of the luck factor, hence they don’t want to change the situation however bad it would be. For an instance, I want to give real life experience on the same, it was about my uncle, they always used to say “It might be God's wish” and accepts that situation. Also, some people are way too much busy in their daily life and couldn’t able to realize about such bad situations in which are into. Even though they realize it, they will not able to find a way through this due to lack of time availability. Another factor I would like to mention here is about skills, those who have possessed limited skillsets or are not qualified much to survive in this fast-paced modern-day life might not want to take a risk. So, even though they want, they couldn’t.
Folks who oppose accepting such a bad situation want to tackle this bad patch of life by consistent efforts. They do believe in hard work and want to improve those situations. They are aware of the courses like money management which are available in the market. So, that they can utilize their funds wisely and avoid situations of running out of money. I do believe that if a person does continuous efforts to change any scenario then definitely, he can achieve it. Also, by upgrading individuals skillsets he can easily apply for his dream job means a job in which he is particularly interested.
To sum up, both the views, it would be always better to take some actions to change the situation because it will be always a win-win situation like if it works then we can live a good life, but if it couldn’t work due to some so and so reasons, we still at the same place or give another try.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... want to overcome this by self-efforts. Im personally inclined towards the second ...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
..., he can achieve it. Also, by upgrading an individuals skillsets he can easily apply for his d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68032786885 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56719107296 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53825136612 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7326475553 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541201765169 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176484162573 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266204093171 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391559942804 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257854904555 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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