Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
During the last ten decades, computers are believed to be one of the greatest breakthrough due to its contribution in all aspects of life. I am in consummate accord with this notion and will explicate my viewpoint in subsequent paragraphs.
The predominant justification to support my standpoint is that the innovation of computers has led to escalate the work efficiency of industries. To elucidate this, such machines provide accurate and precise output while performing various complicated tasks. To exemplify, doing complex calculations is quite convenient by usnig this automatic machine rather than calculating manually. Moreover, margin of error is minimal, thereby making such machines more reliable and efficient. Another paramount benefit is that computers carry out different processes in an easy manner. Elaborating this, the architecture design of such machines enables to attain the work in milliseconds. This will not only save time but also increases the work productivity.
Probing further, computers have also played imperative role in improving health standard of living being. Undoubtedly, it has become only possible to treat distinct hazardous ailments because of advancements in technology, leading to innovate such machines in which various medical parameters are being analysed. For instance, surgical operations involve the use of computers which assist in carrying out such operations more precisely. Further, these machines provide relevant information of diffrent body functions which is essential to know the root cause of a disease or an injury. Hence, computers have increased the life expectancy of human beings by eliminating the factors responsible for detrimental health issues.
In compendium, i would like to ingeminate that computers have proven to be boon for society as time convenience, medical examination and better livelihood made these machines one of the important invention of this contemporary era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6275862069 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02471783061 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 290.0 20.2975951904 1429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1632.0 106.682146367 1530% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 290.0 20.7667163134 1396% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 63.0 7.06120827912 892% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153119767124 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153119767124 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100455348703 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256275601487 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 150.1 13.0946893788 1146% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -248.25 50.2224549098 -494% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.9 11.3001002004 1061% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.85 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.96 8.58950901804 279% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 118.0 10.1190380762 1166% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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