International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, sports are the indispensable part of human being's life. In this present day and age, ample of sporting events are organised at extremely large scale worldwide to assign the platform to the players in order to show their talent and glorify their name yet this tendency brings several troubles to the hosting nations on top of that these type of events are expensive. I accord with the given assertion completely. This essay intends to examine my view point in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold areas of concern. First and foremost, the government of that particular kingdom have to cut their budget. To elaborate it, if any regime wants to held sports events, then it is necessary to cut budget from other important sectors to bear the astronomical outlays namely purchasing of sports equipments, living expenditure of participants and such like. Therefore, it harms the economy of a country. Besides it, the another considerable point is to mention is that, it is detrimental for ecology as well. To demonstrate, to deal with such large events the need of stadiums arise for playing, so the deforestation comes into existence to fulfill the demand of space which not only adversely effects the life of individuals but also of animals as they lose their shelter. Hence, it affects the biodiversity.
Further emphasizing on my views. Principally, the wastage of resources such as water since while playing the need of drinkable water is arisen by players as well as oil filling in vehicles is required to drop the players in hotels. Consequently, the resources gets demolished. Furthermore, visitors who come to watch these events destroy the natural beauty by putting waste in stadiums along with it, there is always high chances of spreading disease as a lot of masses come to these sporting programs it may be possible that anyone can be suffered from any health ailment. As a result, the disease can spread in a nation by got in contact with that individual.
To recapitulate, although sporting events should have to organize because individual can earn their name and fame by participating in it, rational approach should be implemented to sort out the problem which are bought by these events. Then it will be worthwhile for governing body and for civilians.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0206185567 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79446581975 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.2973416908 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961292738053 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204730508496 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337251968279 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596132803667 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282632915494 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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