The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart has illustrated the people’s habit of buying and drinking tea and coffee in five Australian cities based on the responses of a survey.
It is important to note that the proportion of people who bought fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks is always the lowest in every cities that has taken the survey, while the percentage of whom went to a café for coffee is the highest among 4 over 5 cities.
Comparing to other criteria, the percentage of a city residents who bought fresh coffee over last four weeks is the lowest. While the figures for that seem to be higher in the city of Sydney and Melbourne (both are around 43%), that figures in the other cities are incredibly low, one even down to 34%. In Brisbane and Adelaide, the number of people bought instant coffee or went to a café are twice as much as that of whom buy fresh coffee.
Meanwhile, the percentage of people who bought instant coffee seems to be more balance in all five cities. From the survey, it is apparent that about 45% to 55% of the number of people who took the survey bought instant coffee in the last 4 weeks. Moreover, it seems that people tended to go to a café for a coffee or tea since 50% to 65% of the city residents would rather going to a café to just simply buying coffee. This makes these figures the highest in 4 over 5 cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resident'?
Suggestion: resident
...ther criteria, the percentage of a city residents who bought fresh coffee over last four ...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... 65% of the city residents would rather going to a café to just simply buying coffee....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.348 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26277351938 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4846255368 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240817317332 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119019571251 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106349399796 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197433585361 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125630096328 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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