The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The rate of young generations involves in a criminal case have been rising in most countries. Some argued said that parental teaching was the way to make an alternation. From my perspective, I partially agree with the statement above and other measures also included in the step.
To begin with, the fundamental to educate the youngsters is the responsibility of parents. Most parents were blamed by society when their children have some crime recorded. For example, the news was reported about the young offenders was always come together with their family’s background, and pointed out of the scarcity a good communication between each other and consequence in a tragedy. Moreover, in their youth journey, indoctrination is a vital process for every family member. The element of knowledge would be changing their child’s opinion and mind concept. In other words, a good education by parental is the main step need to take and might have an outcome of crime reduction.
Although parental teaching cannot represent all the things, however, it also might be influenced by external factors like friends, videos, movies, and others. Basically, the first impact for the younger one is friend, which is another important character involved in the children's life. Nowadays people who are quiet tend to look at the kinship for those friends. For instance, a Chinese actor has been in prison due to kill people with his friend. Consequently, a bad result was shown that making friends could bring a difference to ourselves. Hence, the exterior cause might affect the belief of younger.
In conclusion, parental education is the basic influence to the younger to make some change and decline the crime happened. Meantime, other issues as external causes are the possibility to make them involve in crime also. Therefore, I believe that both factors play a crucial part in the youth's journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ssibility to make them involve in crime also. Therefore, I believe that both factors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20521172638 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75313099741 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2840729607 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142414352301 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408075654325 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496155674692 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917895424511 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427959204407 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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