in developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the best way to solve the problem by providing schools and teachers. Some others think that it is better to provide computers and Internet access. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the developing nations have faced up with a matter that children born in the countryside do not have enough opportunities to be educated. Some argue that the most necessary solution is recruiting more teachers and opening more schools. Others, however, say that providing computers and Internet access is a more effective way. .In this essay, I am going to analyze both opinions before stating my personal perspective.
On the one hand, it is reasonable why schools and teachers are required to provide. The facilities in the rural areas are apparently less invested than those in the major cities. This leads to the fact that not many teachers choose to devote their careers there due to the lack of chance to get promotion. Therefore, teachers and schools are the most vital factors to form more educational environments for pupils. In a classroom setting, students can ask any questions that they do not understand thoroughly and immediately get the answers from the teachers. Moreover, teachers not only teach children knowledge, but they also provide them valuable moral lessons. For instance, they can teach them about honesty, which is a desired virtue that all of them should have.
On the other hand, installing computers and the Internet can also increase the access to education as well. Firstly, the government is no need to take from the national budget much money to install these devices. The matter only depends on giving instructions for students to use properly. Secondly, there is an abundance of online lessons provided on the Internet. Students can search for all subjects they want without fees. Besides, they can study with friends from all over the world by communicating on social networks. There are several learning forums on Facebook, for instance.
In my opinion, I believe that despite the usefulness of computer and Internet, schools and teachers are still compulsory for children’s education. With teachers as the second parents and school is another home, the kids in the rural areas will have better access to the essential knowledge for their lives.
In the nutshell, I want to emphasize the importance of providing teaches and schools to children in the rural regions. They will be taught both knowledge and the way to behave ethically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14209115282 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70836401627 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56836461126 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.754420391 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1818181818 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281387506087 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733210188616 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731112363548 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15632649637 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508181349247 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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