Rules are a paramount thing to requlate or sociaty. especialy these which expect young people to follow. Whether these rules are strict or not, this can be weighed in many aspects. Admttily, some poeple reject these role and concided them strict for young kids since, these rule will effect there though and right to live freely. In my opinion, I concur with that statement. rules are very important for our children. In the following essay. I will melaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, obeying rules facilitate our life and make it easy. This is due to the fact that, no one can deny that rules will organize our life in many fields. For example, rules saysthat no one can drive till seventeen years old after he takes driver liscene, If government does not put that rule, every one can ride car despite of his old. In the other hand, rules can have heath benefit, no oneunder twenty years old can smook.with this rule we can protect our kids health. As you can see the importace of rule to regulat our life.
In addition, the rules that parents put on their young children can be helpful. This is mainly because they give right for parent to take care of their kids. For instance, when parents ask their kids to return back home before 8pm. Or do not use their phone more than two hours. whenn kids follow these rules, this will enable them to organize their time perfectly. They can study well instead of hanking out side of spend many hour on their phone. That will lead to improve their academic acheivementb and get a high score. This is the important goal for both students and their parents.
In conclussion, the statement that says, the rules which are followed by young people are strict is not as persuasive as it stands. This based on previous expositions that mentioned above about the importance of these vrules in regulating our kids live and improve there vacadimic achievment.
Rules are a paramount thing to requlate or sociaty. especialy these which expect young people to follow. Whether these rules are strict or not, this can be weighed in many aspects. Admttily, some poeple reject these role and concided them strict for young kids since, these rule will effect there though and right to live freely. In my opinion, I concur with that statement. rules are very important for our children. In the following essay. I will melaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, obeying rules facilitate our life and make it easy. This is due to the fact that, no one can deny that rules will organize our life in many fields. For example, rules saysthat no one can drive till seventeen years old after he takes driver liscene, If government does not put that rule, every one can ride car despite of his old. In the other hand, rules can have heath benefit, no oneunder twenty years old can smook.with this rule we can protect our kids health. As you can see the importace of rule to regulat our life.
In addition, the rules that parents put on their young children can be helpful. This is mainly because they give right for parent to take care of their kids. For instance, when parents ask their kids to return back home before 8pm. Or do not use their phone more than two hours. whenn kids follow these rules, this will enable them to organize their time perfectly. They can study well instead of hanking out side of spend many hour on their phone. That will lead to improve their academic acheivementb and get a high score. This is the important goal for both students and their parents.
In conclusion, the statement that says, the rules which are followed by young people are strict is not as persuasive as it stands. This based on previous expositions that mentioned above about the importance of these vrules in regulating our kids live and improve there vacadimic achievment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66470588235 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24633496194 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1852985937 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9565217391 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7826086957 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470209213003 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134840104418 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137579617121 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302491655808 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201320598218 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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