You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.
In your letter,
- describe what you enjoyed about the course
- say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
- suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share detailed feedback on your wonderful institution that is providing learning on recreational activities. However, I will be share talking more about cooking classes.
I took cooking classes at your school where I learned about preparing and cooking exotic continental dishes in veg and non-veg. It was a joyful time while coming to the sessions at your school to learn cooking. I made a couple of friends, and they helped me throughout a course on using different types of equipment while preparing continental meals. The whole entire team learning in those cookery sessions was absolutely amazing because I enjoyed everything such as music, use of appropriate dishes which makes you feel positive and happy while preparing your meals.
Due to this course, I have been preparing regularly cooking on daily basis, and eating healthy cooked meals. Plus, I become physically fit and healthy while learning to make meals from your cookery course. I have now experienced in preparing continental exotic meals but I want to learn about different kinds of meals such as French, Italian, and Chinese. I was hoping to take cooking classes in these three specialization areas of cooking that I have mentioned.
I would like you to please provide the sessions on preparing delicious meals in French, Italian, and Chinese because I always wanted to learn and made such kinds of tasty meals at home because of its freshness and healthy diet. Therefore, I hope you will soon open a course on the above three areas of cooking classes. And, I would love to come again to learn cooking at your lovely institution.
I am looking forward to hearing a response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...to the sessions at your school to learn cooking. I made a couple of friends, and they h...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of cooking that I have mentioned. I would like you to please provide the se...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...nd, I would love to come again to learn cooking at your lovely institution. I am loo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06228373702 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68906445361 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1283561031 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230677218404 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771750932234 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385799772595 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116708752731 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463158360308 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.