Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
In 21st century we are surrounded by the numerous advertisements which it is undeniable in that some advertisement methods are inappropriate as well as not acceptable for community. I strongly agrees with statements ,the following paragraphs discuss on it and leads to a logical conclusion.
On the first hand, nowadays we saw a various advertisement through Newspaper, visual- media, and street-boarding which all are provides a information regarding to some product which is irritating to simple man because due they are not willing to see those adverts or not like that items and so many reasons for it. for instance on road side the advertisement of tobacco , cigarette and other addictive items which have bad effects on human body so straightforward person do not want saw the type of adverts hence, that person complaining all time on it.
on the other hand , every household have television in that so many announcement showing which are not good for kids, in addition due to blessings of technology advertisement company send their advertise directly on a phone and all that unhousing product that will disturb children’s also youngsters mind and they unknowingly trapped into it learn bad things. To exemplify , all are the human exposure to a visual media like television , computer, mobile[phone for using Facebook and other social media website and that place number of source available which dump in worst items and finally that individuals mind trap there.
To conclude , most of the time advert showing on wrong platform and influence individuals to buy or see wrong items and products. In my opinion , number of way by which advertisement company approach to their buyer so they have to choose the proper-way of marketing to protect morals and values of society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18339100346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04911703322 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3469939424 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.25 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.125 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.625 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129419113991 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587824394696 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061277637094 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846673431457 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408596981642 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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In 21st century we are surrounded by the numerous advertis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18339100346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04911703322 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3469939424 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.25 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.125 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.625 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129419113991 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587824394696 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061277637094 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846673431457 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408596981642 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.